Mask
I’m trapped inside myself
Observing through a haze
Missing the whole point in life
Becoming a stranger
Which I can’t relate to in any possible way
The hourglass is pouring
The sand of time that never ceases
Leaving me behind when everyone moves forward
I’m seven steps behind
And running to catch up, with the ever-lasting change
I can’t keep hiding
I can’t keep smiling
I can’t keep building invisible walls
I’m forgetting what feeling, actually feels like
I keep tunnelling deeper
Changing, and trying to smile
But inside it’s hard to keep up
When I feel mixed up inside
And time is never on my side
Come back
The person who used to smile
I miss you
And the person behind the mask, soon will be gone forever
©2008-2009 ~hanz242
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This poured its self out onto word..I don't know where it came from. I suppose its how I really feel, I just dont let myself admit it. So yes, Its one of my first attempts at poetry and I dont think its to bad 
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this is definately not BAD!!!
ITS AMAZING!!!
you should write poetry more often ^^
this is one of the favorites i've ever read!!
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Live a life you love. Love the life you live.
its just everything about is so powerful, and the wording and word choice is impecible. its simply beautiful.
can't wait to hear more!!!
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Appropriate! Thanks for telling me that, it really does make my day awesome!
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glad i could make your day!!!
and you are so welcome
and you rawk too!!!
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Live a life you love. Love the life you live.
i like it
umm... doesnt have much rhythym(sp?)
but i like the general idea of the poem
its good
powerful emotions behind it ^^
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Are my screams loud enough? Can you hear me now? Or should I paint it with red on the bathroom floor?
Read my poems, please!
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out of the lue and all ^^
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Read my poems, please!
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